#InsertMagicHere

*Spoiler Alert* If you have not read By Your Side by Kasie West this post will contain spoilers.

Today is day five of the Biannual Bibliothon and today’s challenge is hosted by Rayna from Reader Rayna. The challenge is to take a scene that doesn’t have any magic in it and add magic.

For this challenge, I decided that I would pick a scene from a recent read, By Your Side by Kasie West.

“The library was too big, and needed more bathrooms, I decided by the time I made it there. I pushed open the heavy wooden door and quickly found a stall.”

Rewrite: As Autumn was walking through the library to the bathroom, thinking that the library needed more of them, a few suddenly appeared along the corridor, as if the walls could hear her thoughts. At first, she was puzzled by the sudden appearance of more bathrooms, but at the same time, she was quite pleased that more had appeared so she didn’t have to walk too far to get to the other bathroom. She wondered what else would magically appear if she thought it.

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