This past weekend I looked through all my old school stuff, not knowing what I would find. I found this story I wrote when I was eight. I was in my second year of second grade. As you can see this is not a well written or even good story. I do think it has potential. I do want to continue with it, but don’t have any ideas as to how I can continue it. I know I need to give the other characters names, and a lot of things need to be better developed. This may turn into a series called story time Monday, where every Monday I post the changes that I have made, and all additions that I have been added.
Once upon a time there was a haunted house and 10 doors and 10 steps in the first door there was a werewolf. In the second door, there was a mummy. In the third door, Dracula popped out. In the fourth door, bats flew out. In the fifth door, there were ghosts that popped out and said “BOO.” In the sixth door, there was an alien with six eyes. In the seventh door, there was a goblin. In the eighth door, there was a witch and she popped out. In the ninth door, there was a skeleton. In the tenth door, a friendly zombie popped out.
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That is such a cute story! But i wouldn’t visit that place though x
I have storytime posts on myblog too but yours are amazing x
Thank you!!
A six eyed alien behind the sixth door? Brilliant, I wouldn’t want to visit that haunted house though!
This is like a childhood, attempt at horror, or scary writing. love it.
Thank you, I’m actually going to edit it and continue it. I’m going to turn it into a short story!
That would be wonderful and also would love reading it
That is too cute! I still have some stories I wrote back in school. I think this would be a really great idea, to go back and make changes. I would definitely be interested in seeing the changes you make to it and how this story would develop!
Thank you! I just don’t know what I’m gonna do with it yet!